My initial Torrey paper critique from the Torrey Writing Director/my mentor…
“Bethany, this is a work of tremendous skill. Well done! You have here a carefully reasoned, skillfully wrought, and beautifully executed argument. I am VERY impressed. You have OBVIOUSLY worked very hard on this. You have Luther’s voice nailed. Your flow of argument is elegant. I don’t see much that needs to change here. (I won’t say that often!)”
This is probably the highest praise I’ve ever gotten from anyone on any assignment in my academic career, much less from a professor who has his master’s in creative writing and is very difficult to impress.